Deep Storyboard

 This is my storyboard for the Deep Project, in these images doesn't have the action or dialogue however in the real thing it does. After doing my storyboard Derek gave me some feedback during the seminar on how I could improve and what mistakes I made. I was spent so long on the drawings that I forgot about the important things like screen direction and objects that seem to disappear in the shot. Mainly I have to look over screen direction for the next projects and I have to focus on how the camera moves as in some shots it doesn't make sense. However he said that I had good numbering and interesting ideas.